Seven Steps to More Coherent Blog Posts, More Readers, and More Subscribers

coherent I’m going to share with you an easy method for writing coherent blog posts, which will allow you to stand out from the crowd and attract a readership. Far too many bloggers are writing rambling, incoherent blog posts that go all over the road. A coherent blog post is one that holds together from beginning to end regarding its topic and stays on course.

Writing coherent blog posts means your readers will better understand you. They will "get" what you’re saying easily, and that leads to loyalty and word of mouth evangelism for your blog. That grows your readership, which is the basis for any business or blog monetization effort. Think about it: would you subscribe to a blogger whose writing you didn’t understand because it wasn’t clear and coherent?

For many of you who are new to blogging, writing for your blog may be the most writing you’ve ever done in a long time, and while it’s a blast, you may be realizing your writing skills are a little rusty. You can’t grow your subscriber base if you can’t effectively get your point across.

Time for some basics.

What I’m sharing with you in this post is by no means the only way to write a coherent blog post, but I feel it will match well for most bloggers on most subjects. If you’re having a hard time staying on the road (in a manner of speaking) when you write a blog post, try using this very simple method for getting some order into your chaos:

  1. Figure out the one thing you want to accomplish with the post.
  2. Write a headline that promises a benefit that will accomplish that.
  3. Say what the benefit or conclusion is in the first sentence.
  4. Create logical steps along the way to achieve the benefit or come to the conclusion.
  5. Make those steps into subheadings in your post.
  6. List the subheadings in advance, go through them in detail, and review them at the end.
  7. End with a strong conclusion that tells the reader to do something in order to achieve the benefit or which reviews the main points that support your conclusion.

Of course, you can already tell I’ll be doing exactly this in the post, so you can see how it’s done (sometimes things get a little weirdly recursive around here–everything is an example of itself).

Figure Out the One Thing You Want to Accomplish with the Post

The post should be about or should accomplish one thing, and one thing only. Have you ever read (or written) a post that seemed to be about several topics at once? It really ended up not being about much of anything. If it seems like you want to say two or three things at once, figure out what they all are, and start draft posts for each one of them. By keeping your focus laser-sharp, your posts will be more coherent before you even begin writing them.

Write a Headline that Promises a Benefit

I’m not going to try and play expert blog copywriter here, but we all know how important the headline is. If your headline can’t hook people in to read the first sentence of your blog post, what’s the point of writing it? Your blog post is in someone’s RSS reader or email inbox along with many other posts or emails, all of which want attention. As people scan through those headlines, they’re looking for something that will benefit them in some way.

You can make sure your blog post’s headline at least promises some kind of benefit that will be of interest to your readers, based on what you know about them. That’s what I’ve done with the headline for the blog post you’re reading now. Every blogger wants more blog readers. Seven easy steps to more readers? *Click!* I gotcha. :) Now I have to deliver.

Say What the Benefit or Conclusion is in the First Sentence

Providing benefit immediately in the first sentence helps to make sure the post will be read. The headline brought in the reader… now what? World-famous ad copywriter Joe Sugarman says the purpose of the headline is to get people to read the first sentence.

Guess what the purpose of the first sentence is?

If you guessed: to get the reader to read the second sentence, congratulations, that’s correct. Providing benefit immediately, in other words, explaining to the reader what will be gained by reading, is necessary to keep attention after the headline.

Create Logical Steps Along the Way

If you use this method, you already know your final point. You know what you want to accomplish. In order to lead your reader to that point, you have to create the steps along the way. There are many ways to create logical steps. In The Elements of Business Writing, Gary Blake and Robert Bly cover principles of organizational order:

  • Location: Use geography to create an order. For example, in a post on a travel blog, begin with where a country is on the globe, then cover the country’s geography, then focus on major cities, and finally, focus on one city.
  • Alphabetically: Great way to do a list without appearing to give preference to any single item.
  • Chronologically: When telling a story, tell the events in chronological order. Never assume your readers know times and dates, always tell them.
  • Problem/Solution: This is a basis for much sales-oriented writing, and with good reason. It’s highly logical and effective.
  • Inverted Pyramid: Journalistic style where the lead sentence explains all pertinent points. Each sentence after explains more and more detail about these points. Who, what, when, where, and how are explained.
  • Deductive order: Start with a general statement and work into specifics that support the conclusion of the general statement.
  • Inductive order: Start with specific statements and build them into a general conclusion.
  • List: What this post is you’re reading now. Usually headlines for these posts use a number, such as 5, 7, or 10.
  • Priority sequence: Rank recommendations, problems, or other items from most important to least important.

This is the toughest part about writing coherently (or trying to) because without some idea of the order, it’s too easy to write our way around as though we were wandering around, lost. Use the points above to create an order to your points your reader will be glad to follow.

Make Those Steps into Subheadings in Your Post

Instead of starting at the beginning of a post and writing it straight through to the end, take those stepping stones you created and turn them into subheadings (heading 2 or 3 in your blog software–if your blog post titles are heading 2, make your subheadings heading 3). Now you can write at least one paragraph under each subheading. Organization and coherence is easy when you follow this method.

List the Subheadings in Advance, Go Through Them in Detail, and Review Them

In my day job, I teach software and web design. I’ve been a professional trainer for eight years. One strategy for adult learning is what we call the "3 Ts":

  1. Tell ‘em what you’re going to tell ‘em
  2. Tell ‘em
  3. Tell ‘em what you just told ‘em!

In other words, give people a road map. Go over the trip’s itinerary. Take your trip. After the journey is over, review the highlights. Simple, and highly effective. You have noticed I listed out all the points in advance of explaining them. Now, I’ll briefly go over the highlights:

  1. Figure out the one thing you want to accomplish, so you can stick to that.
  2. Write a headline that promises a benefit, or your post won’t be read at all.
  3. Say what the benefit or conclusion is in the first sentence, in order to hook your reader and lead them to the next sentence.
  4. Create logical steps along the way, like stepping stones, to help your reader over to "your side."
  5. Make those steps into subheadings, so you have a structure for your post.
  6. List the subheadings in advance, go through them in detail, and review them. Just like I’m doing now! Reviewing helps retention (and gives you another shot at inserting keywords if you’re trying to target certain keywords for blog SEO purposes).
  7. End with a strong conclusion that tells the reader to do something, because it’s only when you actually make a difference in the reader’s life that you will have a growing number of loyal readers.

End with a Strong Conclusion that Tells the Reader to Do Something

These seven steps for a coherent blog post will make your blog writing more accessible and understandable, which will net you more readers and subscribers. People avoid what they don’t understand, and they enjoy what they easily understand and agree with. This makes them more likely to subscribe.

Writing coherently increases the likelihood that your posts will be both understood, enjoyed, and acted upon. The "acted upon" part will not happen unless you encourage your reader to act. Do not overwrite your conclusion: keep it short, simple, and focused on what you want the reader to do.

If you really want to write coherent blog posts that will be clearly understood by your readers, I have a challenge for you: Write a post following my seven steps here, and then leave a comment below with a link to your post so we can see how you followed these seven steps and created a highly coherent blog post.

 

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  • Michael,

    Thank you for the guidelines on blog posts. I do have one, but also help clients with theirs. This is basic information, but oh so great.

    I will be using it for sure.
  • @Katharine - I saw that post! You what's funny? I thought dayum, they're really learning how to blog!. I had no idea you were deliberately following my post formula! :)

    That is both validating and humbling. Thank you for giving it a try!
  • Hey Michael,
    Thanks for the tips! I finally got around to writing a post using the guidelines you mentioned:
    http://www.seattleafs.com/blog/2008/10/06/3-eas...

    Have a good weekend,

    Katharine
    Stucco Italiano
  • @Gary - Excellent work! The method applies well to that post! Love it. :)
  • Michael, Thanks for a helpful post. You can see the result it brought me at http://www.writescribe.com/2008/09/are-you-tired-of-forgetting-ideas

    I started from a draft I already had that was lacking some organization. I went back through the steps and reorganized it. They sure helped me finish it easily.

    Kind regards,
    Gary
  • @Rita - I understand... this type of post needs to be pretty general, and really I guess the unstated caveat always is: apply as you see fit. Once you get the hang of something formulaic, you can play with the formula. Sorta like knowing the rules of grammar so you when to break 'em. Like I do all the time. :)

    @Lin - Click on the "kitchen sink" button on your WordPress toolbar and use the drop-down to pick a heading. And yeah, some attitude. I suppose I could get into trouble but some prices are worth paying. :)
  • Lin
    Darn, my mention of the "h2" subheadings before "thingamajig" didn't go through.
  • Lin
    Whoo, Michael's got attitude too! :)

    I really like these seven steps, and I've tried to figure out how to do the subheadings, or thingamajig, but I'm still lost on that one. Still searching for a good (and simple) tutorial on that.
  • Michael,

    Some of what you have written does not apply to my blog, as I choose to have no theme and offer nothing but what I HOPE will be a well-told tale.

    The Headline is critical, no matter what you are writing about. This past week, I used a Headline in a 2-part series of a comical occurence, and spoke on Part I about a disease from which I suffer! It was a necessary blog to understand the "comedy" in Part II. The response was phenomenal.

    Your advice of "tell em what you,re going to tell em, tell em, and tell em what you told em" is PRECISELY what I tell my students when they have to write an essay. It may sound formulaic, but it DOES work - for both the writer and the reader. It is the way to "organize" your writing, so that it makes sense!

    Great post. Such "simple" advice is NOT easy to follow without practice.

    Thanks,

    Rita
  • @Caanan - Having a process helps a great deal, yes, although my intention was not to make you feel like you were in high school English. ;)
  • Thanks for the post! Made me feel like I was back in HS English, but it really helped to have a process to follow.
  • @Frank - That's a good question. There is no one right answer other than: "long enough to get the job done." That means different things in different situations. But generally, most blog posts average about 250-500 words. Mine are usually much longer.
  • You know you have written a good blog post when you can get someone to read the whole thing and then read the comments! which is what i just did. love that candid conversation going on.

    as far as the content of the post goes i found it very helpful and will definitely refer to it when we begin writing for our new company blog.

    one question ... is there a 'magic' # in terms of ideal word count in a blog post? i've heard things before, but would love your thoughts Michael?

    --
    http://twitter.com/franswaa
  • @Rich - Dude, I want you to come back and post that link! The more examples we have, the better. Plus, that's exactly the right kind of free traffic you want. I believe in creating opportunity for people whenever I can.

    @James - I certainly look forward to and welcome it if you gave this a try. I'd love to hear how it goes for you.

    @Sonia - I know, I know, we all have our quirky ways of doing things. Sometimes those quirks prevent us from writing as coherently as we'd like, but also, that's just us being ourselves. Having a template like this is nice, but you can't use it all the time (I know you know that, I'm just sayin').
  • This is such useful advice! Having a methodology or a template is so useful. It's one thing to bang out one or two posts, or even a small series, but when you're creating lots of content for a form like a blog (or a newsletter) you really need to have some good systems or you just burn out.

    I confess, I often don't get to #1 until I'm most of the way through #6. It's not that I don't start with an idea, it's just that it often morphs into something very different.

    @Rich, good for you for taking criticism as constructive! That's an awesome skill to have. And yes, I think if you take Michael's template, you're going to create some great content.
  • A writing challenge! A writing challenge!!

    *goes off to scribble furiously*

    Check it for Monday!
  • \Very BIG Grin/

    You've got it Michael! I'll stick around as I really mean it that I like what you teach.

    The next post I do on that site I will follow the above instructions to a "T." I won't even come back to link to it either. LOL!

    All the best.

    Rich
  • @Rich - LOL! I hope you know I was trying to help you with that! :)

    What you wrote wasn't crap at all, but it did seem inappropriate to the spirit and the nature of my post. Clearly, I made assumptions, and you have clarified those.

    Stick around and I'll go easier on ya!

    I once thought someone was spamming me and after a few emails, realized they weren't and now we're friends. Life is strange.
  • Ouch! I stand corrected and humble.

    Here's the thing Michael. You are an expert in this and I am not. I in no way took a "cheap shot" with the link because it was totally innocent.

    I never even thought about linking to a specific article because I just wrote it and felt that it "sort of" fit right in with what you were telling us.

    With your experience I think that it becomes easy to distrust everyone and an error in linking might look like crap to you, but I did not mean to do it that way.

    I'll say one thing about Michael Martine, he doesn't hold back, and he doesn't suffer fools!

    Mea culpa, I love all of the things you share Michael. Thanks for the heartfelt criticism.

    Rich Hill
  • @Toma - Excellent! Thanks for reading my ebook and the blog. I hope you stick around for a long time and get lots of value from what you read here. Contact me if there's anything you want to know about blogging. You can email me at michaelmartine@gmail.com.

    @Rich - I don't see how anyone could think your post even "sort of" qualifies. You didn't link to a post, you linked to your home page. In your most recent post is nothing resembling what I describe in my post.

    You had a real chance to make a great impression and get new readers, but you chose instead to take a cheap shot, which reflects poorly on you and your blog. Your blog has great potential, so don't damage that by doing things like this.
  • Michael,

    I just wrote a post before reading this article of yours and I think it sort of qualifies. What do you think?

    It is about the New York State wine business and may be found at http://NYuncorked.com.

    Traffic started tripling yesterday and I want to keep it that way.

    Thanks.

    Rich Hill
  • Hi,

    I've start reading your blog and I've started with the e-book you offer for free. Thank you for that : some very good concepts.

    Great content in this article also. The most important thing that I also think that could influence the readers is the title of the post. And I have to admit it's not that easy : for me at least. I'm steel learning how to attract people writing good content and good titles. Of course that expressing your ideas in a logical way is very important also. The e-book helped in getting some order in my ideas. Thank you.
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